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of the mist whispers and
soggy willow branches
above the werewolves and
jasmine flower blossoms-
niched to brown liquid
flowing in veins and
the half-smile of the moon;

dragonfly eyed and hickory
wings sailing the milky
way until the sun crack
lulls reality into
day
4/30/13 NaPoWriMo Day#30
My late night ode to the last day~ Inspired by that project due tomorrow and it's one in the morning. (yay.) Also, by this lovely spoken word I have been procrastinating and listening to~ [link]
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UntamedUnwanted Featured By Owner Nov 3, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Your gorgeous work has been featured here: untamedunwanted.deviantart.com…
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The-Night-Dreamer Featured By Owner Nov 8, 2013  Student Writer
Thank you! :heart:
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GileadsBalm Featured By Owner Jun 12, 2013
I think, of the six or seven poems of yours that I've read this is my favorite. I have a weakness for things that can be described as simply beautiful. I subscribe the the group of poets that believe a poet's job is to take something ordinary and remind us how it is beautiful.

Your characteristic imagery is especially strong in this poem, and I really can't find anything that I find disagreeable about your work here.

There's a certain tranquility to this poem. It imparts the feeling that all is as it should be, that everything is in its place.

Keep writing, I will keep reading :D

Vision: 9/10
Originality: 9/10
Technique: 10/10
Impact: 9/10
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The-Night-Dreamer Featured By Owner Jun 14, 2013  Student Writer
I'll be sure to! :heart:
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Lady-Yume Featured By Owner Jun 8, 2013   Writer
Hello (: I'm just stopping by to tell you that your beautiful work has been featured in my latest journal; [link] :heart:
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Concora Featured By Owner May 4, 2013   Writer
This piece has been featured in #The-Asterismos' weekly Showcase [here].

Please support your fellow featured deviants, and thank you for sharing your wonderful work with the group! :thanks: :heart:
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The-Night-Dreamer Featured By Owner May 5, 2013  Student Writer
Thank you very much! I'll make sure to~ :heart:
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Octavias101 Featured By Owner May 3, 2013  Student Writer
very beautiful imagery~ ^^
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The-Night-Dreamer Featured By Owner May 3, 2013  Student Writer
Thank you! :heart:
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Octavias101 Featured By Owner May 3, 2013  Student Writer
no problem! ^^ <3
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