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Can you hear them from your speakers?
complaining   while   maintaining
multiple online personas
drowning in useless megabytes
neck just barely above the
torrent of the social me-
dia movement breathing in
Internet's unintended
way of life on their fifteen
inch screens addicted to
the filtered medica-
tion they are gobbling
down like guppies in a
fish tank of which glass
walls are created
of what they forged from
their minds to forget
why all the facts
were there in the
first place
for them to breathe
in all that is
but
         so
                   soon
                             do they
                                        forget
and     want     nothing
    -cept   anything
           for someth-

and
                      all becomes

      condensed
4/1/13 NaPoWriMo Day#1
...I am guilty of this as well. And so NaPoWriMo begins! It wasn't originally what I intended to write but I like the way it came out~
I can't wait to see how I'm going to churn out 30 in a month...
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forestmeetwildfire Featured By Owner Apr 1, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Loving the rhythm! and the whole internet-metaphor thing. The guppies part was sadly accurate. What has the internet done to me :ohnoes:
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The-Night-Dreamer Featured By Owner Apr 2, 2013  Student Writer
Pfft, everyone's a guppy~ :meow:
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AyeAye12 Featured By Owner Apr 1, 2013  Student Writer
Great writing style! It feels very frantic and passionate, with a pinch of beat poetry.

A good start for NaPoWriMo :)
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The-Night-Dreamer Featured By Owner Apr 1, 2013  Student Writer
Haha, beat poetry is one of my favorite styles. Thank you! :)
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AyeAye12 Featured By Owner Apr 1, 2013  Student Writer
Your welcome =)
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